Unfair Soldier

You’re an unfair soldier
You don’t know right from wrong
Pushing up on me like you know it all
but what’s going on with me you don’t even know

I love that your successfully making it
In all the things you do
You got yourself all together
I’m so proud of you
But this doesn’t give you the right to be dictating what my next move is going to be
The road I’m about to take is mine, not yours, so don’t be pushing me
Your intentions may be fine
But don’t be acting like some god divine, trying to gain complete control, no,that’s just out of line
Take all your demands, your unwelcome words
Take them with your lines of disrespect
Trash them with your ultra size ego
If you can’t be patient, be positive and support me like I need
Then I suggest you just get the hell on out of here

Our love right here
It aint no battlefield
I ain’t trying to win, or compete
I just want to be alive while on earth I live.
I was fine before I even met you
I wasn’t struggling
Money, clothes, shoes and jewels, they flow in fine
Family, friends, their love and time, they keep me strong, they’re all I need
Getting this non-love from you is something I choose not to keep

How can you even think
That I could be
so materialistic that all I need are your receipted gifts
You wondering why I be
asking for your thoughts, your feelings, your time
Understand that I am not
Some unspoken mistress you can play with at any time

You may be a soldier in this world of money and pride
but climbing up the ranks is not what is running through my mind
Don’t use me as some pawn
Cherish me as your queen
Or else I’ll just go find someone else
Who appreciates the independent woman I love being.

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2 thoughts on “Unfair Soldier

  1. Noel Williams (prhayz) www.prhayz.com says:

    Sorry if I have been too imposing MissCaryl. I completely forgot that you are an independent woman. I apologize! from now on, I’ll see you as you are–a human being who deserve to be treated with respect, fairness, and equality.

    Thanks for sharing. God bless you.

    • MissCaryl says:

      Hehe no worries. This actually came about after listening to a song while cleaning my room. My mind skewed the beat and i started freestyling … And vavoom! The finished product 🙂 glad to say not something ive experienced first hand 🙂

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